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Friday, 28 February 2025
Review of Convergence by Esther Pia Cordova
Thursday, 27 February 2025
Revision Life [CC]
Tuesday, 25 February 2025
#TeaserTuesday
What Tara witnessed could bring about an end to the case...
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“I don’t know how much help I’ll be, I can only remember parts of it and I don’t recall the man’s face.”
“But it was a man?” she asked.
“I assume so because of the build and height, he used something to disguise his voice so I can’t be one hundred percent sure.”
“It’s fine, we don’t have much physical evidence, though obviously when the DCI wakes up, we’ll be questioning him as well,” she said with a smile. “Just tell us what you remember.”
“Okay,” I said, my voice shaking a little.
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Monday, 24 February 2025
The Differences Between Editing & Revising
THE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN EDITING AND REVISING
Last week I talked about the differences between drafting and revising (found here), and I thought that this week I would touch on the differences between editing and revising since I've recently done both with dev edits and all my revision projects, and will continue to do that as I move through the year and the next professional edit stage.
Just to be clear, I see revising as the process you as the author go through while rereading and tweaking your story. This is usually without any input from professional editors, but can be based on the feedback of betas, alphas, and sensitivity readers. Editing, for me at least, is the part where you go through and make edits after you've worked with a professional, whether that's developmental, or line, copy, or proof. That's what I personally class as editing, but everyone is different.
I will also only really be able to talk about how the process has worked for me, and just because something has worked for me, or it's a difference for me, it doesn't mean that it's the same for everyone. We all approach theses processes differently and that's completely okay. So with all that said, let's get into it!
#1 THERE'S MORE LEEWAY WITH REVISING
When I approach revision, I'm always aware of the longer deadline. I know that I have to get the book to the editor by a certain date and even then, there's some wiggle room. Because I usually have a long period to get the book into shape, and I have my outline to allow me to do that, it feels like unless it's literally the last read through before the editor, there's more leeway. I can think over plot changes longer. I can do a draft without the changes being made, and I have more time to think about things
On the flip side, with editing, there is, usually, a very firm deadline. As an indie author, I set my own deadlines, to a point, but there are others in there that can't be moved, and sometimes you just have to make the changes and be sure that's the final version because this editing train is moving and it will not stop. So because of that, I feel like when doing my changes, that I have a lot more pressure to get it right the first or second read through, because time is very much running out.
#2 THERE'S MORE GUIDANCE WITH EDITING
I've worked with a number of editors, most of them good, a few of them not, but one clear thing has always been the guidance. If I didn't think something worked, I can, and do, turn to them and ask for clarification. If I feel like I'm close, but not quite there, I can have them read through the changes again and get that feedback. I feel like it's a way of making those changes that might leave you a little unsure, but with the ability to ask someone else who already knows the whole story, and can jump in and let you know if you've strayed a little too far one way or the other.
With revision, you can ask betas, you can get their feedback, but you can't, usually and in my experience, then ask them again if what you've done works. Sure you can bring in new betas, and maybe they will give you that feedback, but it's not quite the same as with editing, where you can check in with the person telling you how to change things and have a whole discussion. It feels a lot more like you're on your own, and you have to make these choices and be sure you like them because there's no one there really to tell you if they work or not. Yes, there are critique partners, but if you don't have those, you're alone with all of this.
#3 BOTH USE A SIMILAR KIND OF PROCESS
With revising, you're looking at the book critically and you're doing the same with editing. While one is more on your own speed, the other is with a professional backing you, and the whole process ends up being one with the same kind of outcome. Changes will be made, and you will craft your story the way you're going to, but while one seems to be a try it and see, the other is more firm in what needs to be done.
Now I say that, and realise that some writers worry about editors changing their story. This is not how a good editor should work. If someone is telling you that you have to this or that, and you, as the author, don't want to do that, it's your choice. Every change is optional, but be wary of clinging too much to what you've already written, ninety percent of the time, those changes are what will make your book so much better.
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Friday, 21 February 2025
Review of Fracture by Melanie Hooyenga
And so are the mind-blowing headaches.
But
flickering isn’t the only thing giving Biz headaches. Her newly shaved
head brings out the bullies, her boyfriend Cameron is getting a little
too chummy with a girl from the kidnap support group, and Cameron’s
formerly kidnapped sister is having some serious adjustment issues.
When
her dad’s health takes a turn for the worse, she turns to her
neurosurgeon who operated on her. If she tells him the truth, he could
figure out why she and her dad flicker and save her before her entire
world—and her own health—crumbles. But can Biz trust him with her
secret?
My Review: 5 STARS
I dived into this after devouring book one and loved it from the start. Hooyenga never shies away from hard hitting topics and this one was a book that pulled you right to the edge and allowed you to start to discover more about Biz, about her ability and all it entails. I adored the characters, the twists and turns and I fell in love with all of the world, and the hard choices Biz was having to make. That ending almost destroyed me and I’m glad to have book three on hand to finish off the series. Overall a beautifully crafted, and well written book. Very much recommended!
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Thursday, 20 February 2025
Editing: Tips [CC]
Tuesday, 18 February 2025
#TeaserTuesday
Lock knows something is going on, but she doesn't know how to stop it...
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Connors didn't meet that criteria, at least she didn't from what I'd read. However, she had, supposedly, been working on exposing people who circumvented the sixty year law. Wouldn't that make her a threat? Someone who was working against the change these people were trying to exact?
Looking at it dispassionately, which I think was the only way I could look at it, you could see Connors as a threat that needed to be silenced. It wasn't right by any means it was, plain and simple, murder and to know I played a part in that almost made me lose my breakfast.
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Monday, 17 February 2025
The Differences Between Drafting & Revising
THE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN DRAFTING AND REVISING
As you'll know by now if you've been following me for a while, I paused drafting while I worked on revisions for a time. I got to the point of turning 40 and having 40 first drafts, and worked out if I kept going at that pace, I would have 80 first drafts by the time I turned 50 and with the speed of publishing, I would have ages between when a book was first written, to when it was time for it to be published. So I ended the current series I was working on, bringing me to 48 finished first drafts, and went back to start revising for a time.
I always wanted to do this because I knew there were projects in my backlog that would need more time devoted to them than I would have if I didn't do something like this. I usually publish, when publishing twice a year, in May and October, which means that I have a small window to get the books revised and such before they go off to the editor. I wanted to make sure I had the time to really dig into them, and do any rewrites that were necessary. It also gave me the time to spend longer with some projects that were due to go to the editor. Like with the Invisible quartet, I needed more time because there'll be a period when they're with the sensitivity readers and I also need time to put their corrections in the document. So yeah, it worked out well for me, and I'll be doing this for at least the next year.
So I wanted to talk to you about the differences I'd noticed between drafting stories, and revising them. Of course this is only going to apply to my way of doing things. I'm sure that other writers approach the drafting and revising process differently, and I am not, for one moment, thinking mine is the only, or even the best, way to go about doing it. We all have to do what works for us.
#1 DRAFTING IS MORE LAID BACK FOR ME
I am more of a panster than a planner. At least when it applies to drafting. I will have a minimal chapter plan, but beyond that I don't really think too far ahead. Because of that, drafting is a lot more laid back, it doesn't seem to have as much of an onus on getting this right and closing this plot hole or working out this character arc and the like.
In contrast, revising is literally, for me at least, where this things matter a whole ton. If I don't focus on the plot holes then, I will get hit with them while editing and I do not want that. So when it comes to revising, I do outline and plan more, because I have to make sure that there aren't little bits and pieces missed. Otherwise things can go very very wrong. So revising, for me, is a little more pressure, but it's not as bad as editing, which I'll talk about another time.
#2 REVISING NEEDS MORE IMMEDIATE FOCUS
Like I said above, revising is when the pressure increases and I need to make sure to iron out all those kinks. It's the time when if I don't know if something works, I need to find the answer because otherwise I'm in big trouble. I usually revise over a long period, months or so, and because of that I'm able to take some time, not much, to really think about the long term implications of doing things a certain way. I need to have the ideas, the outline, and I need to make sure that I stick as close to it as possible. And if I don't, I need to have an idea of why, and follow through.
Drafting is more about exploring the story for the first time. Like I'll have some goal posts or scene ideas but they can and do change on the regular. While I do some minimal editing while I go, I'm aware that if I make a big change, all I have to do is note it down and think about it later, as in when revising, because right then all that matters is getting the story down on the page.
#3 BOTH REQUIRE DIFFERENT SKILL SETS
Drafting has it's own process for me, like I've said, I don't have to sit down and have a strict outline. I don't have to worry if character A had brown hair on one page and blonde on another. I don't have to be too strict with myself. I can just follow the story and that's what works for me.
On the flip side, revising, the way I approach it anyway, allows me to fill in those holes and gaps and requires a more critical eye of both the story, and the way I'm telling it. While I've only, a handful of times, had to rewrite the book completely, I do have to do massive rewrites because the bones are good, but everything else needs serious work.
No matter which one you're working on, they require different kinds of skills, and they are both hard work. Good luck to all of those writers doing any of these. You got this!
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Friday, 14 February 2025
Review of Catch The Bride by RosaLinda Diaz
Jade didn’t mean to run away the week of her wedding.
It just...happened.
One minute she was refereeing family drama and the next she was speeding down the road in the dead of night like an escaped convict.
But she wasn’t ready to go back...not yet.
Being a first-year teacher and a bride-to-be left Jade a frazzled shell of her usual bubbly self – which isn’t who she wants to be. Now the school year’s over, the wedding is a week away, and she’s panicking about the reception, the seating chart, and most of all their future together.
It’s not that she doesn’t love Vance, they're high school sweethearts, after all. When she finds a box of mementos Jade’s reminded of what it was like to fall in love. But so many years together have left their once exciting relationship in a rut. Not exactly an enticing preview of married life.
Will her once doting boyfriend, turned distracted fiancé become a distant husband?
With miles between her and wedding responsibilities, Jade’s looking back on their relationship and wondering if their happily ever after isn’t guaranteed after all. The Belles, her three best friends since college, come to the rescue...but are they in time to keep Jade from making the biggest mistake of her life?
Will Jade catch feelings instead of flights or is this bride bound to bolt for good?
My Review: 5 STARS
I picked this up as the last book in this series and was desperate to know what lay ahead for Jade and Vance. The last couple for the series and one that seemed to be already pretty much cemented. I adored the glimpses back to their first meeting, loved the way the story wove stress and happiness all together and made you feel like you were living the whole thing along side the characters. The way everything came together was just perfect, and a delightfully sweet romance to end the series on a high. I adored it, and can not recommend it enough!
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Thursday, 13 February 2025
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Tuesday, 11 February 2025
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Tara doesn't have an uncle, and she doesn't know how to deal with the press...
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“When did this uncle call, and did he leave a name?” I asked, my voice shaky.
“A few times yesterday and then once early this morning, is there a problem, Tara?” she said, picking up on my tone.
“As far as I’m aware, I don’t have any other living relatives. I don’t have an uncle,” I said, trying to force the words out over the lump of fear now lodged in my throat. “If he calls again, can you get his name please? Or at least a number for me?”
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Monday, 10 February 2025
5 Facts On My Current Working Projects
5 FACTS ON MY CURRENT WORKING PROJECTS
It's been a while since I did a five facts piece, but since I've not been drafting for over six months, it's just not been something I could do. I thought that I would give you five facts about the projects I'm currently working on. But before I get into that, lemme tell you about those projects.
I am revising four projects currently. I'll See You Thru is a YA paranormal/romance standalone. It's about witches and curses and falling in love. This Is How It Ends is a YA thriller standalone. It's about friendship, death, loss, secrets, and hunting for the truth. Visible is the third in the Invisible quartet which is a YA dystopian series. It's all about viruses and disability, adaptation and resilience. And Cramping Chronicles: The Fourth Torment is the fourth in the Cramping Chronicles series, which is YA urban fantasy. It's about empaths, disability, and saving the world whether you want to or not.
So those are my four projects. I'm also doing line edits for Translucent which is the second in the Invisible quartet and due out later this year. I'm gonna focus on the revision projects though since I feel like I can give some facts on those without falling into spoilers. So here we go!
FACT #1: ALYA & FREYA HAVE NO IDEA THE THINGS THEY'LL GO THROUGH
So these two are from I'll See You Thru and both of them are about to sit their first year A-level exams, so about seventeen. Both of them wake up as see thru, wraiths in other words, and they both have to work together to find out who cursed them, why, and how to undo it all. While Ayla has no experience of the witches in their world, Freya does, even if she's not a fan of them. Both of them have to overcome their own worries and try and stay together to find answers. It's not easy, there's a lot keeping them apart, and also Ayla isn't fond of lying, and she's in a position of having to do a lot of that which she is not happy about. But hopefully, at the end, all will turn out right.
FACT #2: MAGGIE HAS NO IDEA THE SECRETS SHE WILL UNCOVER
Maggie is the main character of This Is How It Ends. She's been sure that when Delia died, she knew everything that happened, but a random photo on Facebook has her questioning everything. She wants to believe that Paula and Juliet will tell her the truth, but it soon becomes clear that both are hiding something, and with the mysterious DJ demanding Maggie uncover the truth, she's in a position of having to question everything. Would her friends lie? Did they have something to do with Delia's death? And if they did, how did they get away with it? Along the way she's going to uncover a whole bunch of secrets, some of them she kinda isn't sure what to do about.
FACT #3: ZYA ISN'T SURE ABOUT THE SAFETY OF WHERE THEY ARE
Zya is one of the main characters from the Invisible quartet and while I can't go into details of where they are because that would spoil book two, I will say that Zya is sure that while they've all been told one thing about the people in charge of the country, she's not completely sold on it being the whole truth. She's lost a lot, faced countless dangers, and she's not sure that this is the end of it all, and she has no idea who to trust.
FACT #4: JONAH WILL FIGHT FOR WHAT'S RIGHT
Jonah is the other main character from the Invisible quartet and the same applies here in that I can't go into major details because of book two not being out yet. I will say that Jonah is pretty solid on his use at the end of that book, and things happen in Visible that allow him to see for himself that he has something he can do to save the people he cares about. Betrayal and violence lay ahead, but he's going to get through it, if he can.
FACT #5: JESSIE WAS NEVER PREPARED FOR THIS
Jessie is the main character in the Cramping Chronicles series, and I need to be somewhat careful with spoilers because of how Third Ache, the third book, ended. Jessie has a battle on her hands and she is woefully unprepared for what lay ahead. She doesn't have much time, but enough to maybe come out of it and save everyone, even if she loses herself in the process.
So there we go, those are five facts about my current projects. I should be handing over Fourth Torment to the editor in April, so that's in the later stages, and the first two will be done with revisions, for now, in March/April time so it's gonna be different projects I work on then.
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Friday, 7 February 2025
Review of Flicker by Melanie Hooyenga
Biz is a perfectly normal teenager except for one minor detail:
she uses sunlight to jump back to yesterday. She takes advantage of
flickering by retaking Trig tests, fixing fights with her boyfriend (or
reliving the making up), and repeating pretty much anything that could
be done better.
Trouble is, flickering makes her head explode from the inside. Or feel like it anyway.
No
one knows about her freakish ability and she’s content to keep it that
way. Guys don't stick around because she refuses to let them in, but all
that changes when Cameron, her best friend, starts looking oh-so-yummy.
Suddenly she's noticing his biceps, his smile, and the cute way his
eyes crinkle when he—gah! This is her friend!
But the butterflies
come to a screeching halt when little girls start disappearing, then
take a nosedive when the police link the kidnappings to Cameron's
sister, who vanished years earlier. As the police grasp for clues, Biz
photographs a strange man lurking in the shadows and realizes that her
flickering can help more than just herself.
My Review: 5 STARS
I picked the perfect time to read this series because it helped keep me distracted while I was in hospital myself. Hooyenga has knocked this one outta the park. Biz and her ability pull you in and allow you to get lost in the twists and turns of the story. I adored the romance and mystery element, and she brings it all together to allow you to get hooked on her words, as well as desperate to know more. I’ve already picked up book two because I need to know what lies ahead for Biz and everyone else involved. An amazing start to a series and one I very much recommend!
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Thursday, 6 February 2025
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Tuesday, 4 February 2025
#TeaserTuesday
Crime waits for no one, not even sleep...
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I was rudely awoken the next day at three am by my tablet and my watch buzzing with an important call. I worried it might be Mum getting back to me.She wouldn’t normally call this late unless there was a problem. I answered the call, feeling my heart beat a little faster than normal.
“Sorry to wake you, Fyfe, but there’s been another murder and the DI wants us to check it out,” she said, with a grimace.
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Monday, 3 February 2025
Celebrating Your Wins - The Creative Process
CELEBRATING YOUR WINS
I did a video about this last year (linked here) and thought that I would also write about it because I feel like it's something that often gets forgotten about. Everyone has wins sometimes, and a lot of the time, in the writing space at least, we're kinda taught that we have to only celebrate the big ones. Whether that's getting a publishing deal from trad pub, or hitting a bestseller list, or anything huge like that, those are seen as the ones that are more 'worthy' than the others.
To be honest, I've been guilty of this. When I first started writing when I was 19 (turned 43 last month) I celebrated every little thing. If I finished my work early, then that was cause for a little joy. When I finished a book, same thing. I got into the habit, and then, as things changed, I got out of it again. It's really only been the last five or so years that I've started to get back into it. I celebrate book releases of course, always have done, though they've become a bigger celebration in recent years, but I don't always think to celebrate when I finish the editing cycle, or when I finish a draft, or when I'm done with revisions. And these things should be celebrated.
At the end of the day, writing is hard, most creative pursuits are because you're putting a piece of yourself into your work, whether planned or not, and sending it off into the world to be seen and looked at by other people. That is terrifying! And sometimes they do really well, and other times they just don't. But for me as an author, someone who doesn't make lists, and who rarely gets shoutouts from readers, it can be easy to fall into that trap of thinking that you didn't really achieve anything because you didn't get one of these huge things.
That's not true. I write my books because I know there are people out there who need my stories. I don't know if that's a huge number of people, or just a small pool. I don't know if they will ever get to the point of going viral and being huge breakout hits. But, I still did an amazingly impossible thing. I wrote a book. I wrote a lot of them, and I managed to get through all those many steps to publishing, and they are out there, for people to read and devour and love. That is huge. It is something that should be celebrated and hyped up, even if only by you, and the people who care for you.
I know it can be hard to acknowledge your own wins. Like I said, it's not something that comes easy to me, but it is something that you should, hopefully, learn to do. You are the only one who can define what a win for you looks like. For me right now, I'm celebrating finishing dev edits for my next release. I'm into the line editing phase and that always feels like a much smaller mountain to climb than dev edits. It's something I'm proud of myself for managing, especially with everything else going on.
My wins may not match your idea of your own wins, and that's okay, but it is something you should think about doing, because at the end of the day, you did something amazing, and you should be proud of yourself, even if no one else in your home life is, or even online. You should be proud of you for managing to do this.
Happy writing!
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